I actually finished this book around five o’clock this morning, but I was too tired after reading it to write a review. And then I wanted to re-read a few bits and ponder it before writing about it. To make sure that I did the awesomeness that is Breaking Dawn full justice. I even thought about the book while I thrashed around in bed this morning.
But first, I have to tell you about the midnight party Baxt and I went to. Baxt dressed up and looked awesome. I didn’t, opting for the old jeans-and-cashmere-sweater ploy. When we arrived at the bookstore, there were three lonely people. As the minutes to midnight (we got there at around 11:50) counted down, a few more stragglers arrived. I think that in total, there were around 10 people, which was very sad, but major props to Gallery for staying open. Seriously, it was awesome and hugely appreciated by those of us who were there. There was a trivia contest.
I am ashamed to say I won, despite pausing for extended periods to answer questions in the hopes that I wouldn’t be revealed for the nerd that I am. And I got the privilege of buying the first book out of the box. So, uhm, yay me?
Anyway, Breaking Dawn. If you haven’t read it yet and you are planning to, you might want to stop here, because I wouldn’t want to spoil the fun for you. Although Baxt ended up hanging out at my house and watching Buffy while I read most of the book, and her Buffy-watching was accompanied with a steady assortment of snorts, and several verbal outbursts, like “oh my,” and “you sneaky devil,” and she wasn’t spoiled. In fact I think she found it amusing. If you want to skip ahead to the feminist analysis, it’s a few paragraphs down.
Basically, the book is broken into three parts. We hear the first part, Bella’s wedding and honeymoon, from Bella’s perspective. The wedding is most silly. The honeymoon is, uhm. Well if you were expecting hot vampire on human love scenes, you’ll have to be satisfied with allusions to teh sexing, but no actual sexing. I can’t really blame Stephenie Meyer for that, honestly, writing sex scenes can’t be that fun. And there is a lot of destroying of bedrooms (hot) and being covered in bruises (also hot).
BUT THEN, in a SHOCKING development, Bella gets preggo with a demon lovechild! I totally knew it was coming, within seconds of the waking after the night of teh sexing, and Bella being all hungry. Because of course normal girls aren’t hungry after a night of pillow wrangling, so Bella must have been PREGNANT! OH MY LORD!
And then, Edward wanted to force an abortion on her. And Bella…finally grew a pair and said fuck off, and it was AWESOME. I’ve criticized these books very heavily from a feminist perspective, so having the main character assert her right to choose was amazingly cool and wonderful, and Mrs. Meyer won some major points.
Then we got Jacob’s perspective on the next bit, which involved the demon lovechild slowly killing Bella from the inside until they figured out that the baby wanted blood (of course), and Bella’s blood-aversion turned into a blood craving (naturally), and then Bella basically died in childbirth. But it’s cool, because that was sort of the plan all along, so that they could vampirize her. Good times. Jacob became…less annoying, somehow, and that was the tip-off that he might be sticking around in some capacity.
The awesome and hilarious part of the Jacob section was the moment when Edward offered to make a deal with Jacob: if Jacob could convince Bella to abort the murderous demonchild, Jacob could, uh, father a child on Bella while she was still human. The idea being that Bella’s fetus was, you know, totally interchangeable with a child by another man. Jacob, to his discredit, was like “boo-ya,” but Bella was having none of it. Again, Stephenie, props. Sort of. I could have done without the whole misogynistic talk with Edward basically giving Bella’s body away, because it was quite unpleasant, but I know where Edward was coming from. And the conversation had biblical basis (Hagar, anyone), so I can’t fault Meyer there. And, in the end, Bella came out swinging.
So the third and final part of the book is written from Bella’s newly turned vampire perspective. Miraculously, Bella doesn’t struggle with the difficulty of being a newborn, thanks to her considerable mental strength (which turns out to be a talent greater than any of her pals), and she gets to be stronger than everyone else for awhile. She apparently craves teh sexing like she craves blood, which is amusing, and the demon lovechild turns out to be extraordinarily precocious, maturing rapidly into some sort of super child with magical abilities.
And…Jacob falls in love with the baby. I mean everyone does kind of because she has creepy charisma, but did I mention the whole imprinting thing? Basically werewolves (it actually later emerges that Jacob and the gang are shapeshifters, but anyway), imprint on people. At any age. At any time. And then fall madly in love. In New Moon, we got to see wolves imprinting on like two year olds, which was creepy, but the baby? Creepier.
Of course, the rapid maturation means Jacob doesn’t have long to wait (around seven years to adulthood), and it means that Jacob magically gets to remain in Bella’s life, albeit as a son in law. So, really, teams Edward and Jacob both win. Yay them. And everyone lives happily ever after, with the werewolves and the vampires being buddies. After a big battle, of course. Oh, and Bella and Edward live in a cottage that sounds totally pimp.
So now that I’ve basically totally spoiled the book for you (aren’t you just SHOCKED by the ending?), it’s time to criticize Breaking Dawn from a feminist perspective. Given that one of the reasons I’ve been reading the books is to rail against them, and the fact that I riled up thousands of people yesterday by challenging the anti-feminist content of the series, it’s only fair.
This book is much less problematic than the rest of the series, although there are still problems. Bella really comes into her own in Breaking Dawn, which is both good and bad. On the good side, we have Bella asserting herself, being much more confident and strong. Which is awesome, don’t get me wrong, and the process even starts before she becomes a vampire, with the pregnancy. The child is a catalyst for Bella’s awakening, in a way.
On the bad side of things, though, Bella only becomes “supermodel beautiful,” strong, and mentally powerful when she becomes a vampire. I mean this is the point of the books, that you are turned and you become insanely hot and strong, and the process refines mental talents. So there was really no way around it, but it stillĀ made me a little sad. I was glad that we had repeated mentions in the wedding that Bella was beautiful, but Bella calls her human form “hideous” after turning, which was kind of depressing. Sure, it was fun to see her perform feats of strength and refine her mental talents, but as Stephenie said yesterday, physical strength isn’t what makes a strong woman. It’s emotional strength.
And in this book, Bella definitely moves forward on the path of being an emotionally strong woman. She does things independently, she thinks for herself, she asserts herself. And that’s awesome to see. The scene where Jacob is offered her body in trade, though, is really problematic for me. It may have biblical basis, and it may come from love, but it’s still disturbing. But Bella’s response to being treated as chattel is to reject the entire idea as the tomfoolery that it is, so in a way the scene sets Bella up as an even stronger character, but I’m still not sure that makes it ok.
I’d say that Breaking Dawn marked a huge turning point for Stephenie Meyer’s work. It may not be quite as girl-positive as I might like, but there were some very real feminist lessons in there, like a woman taking charge, a woman asserting her right to choose, a woman proving that she can be physically stronger than a man, a woman growing into her own.
So either this is the most subversively brilliant book series ever, with Meyer setting girls up and then breaking down their assumptions, or you could consider the series 75% antifeminist, and 25% awesome. Your choice.
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Breaking Dawn, by Stephenie Meyer. Published 2008, 756 pages. Fiction.